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  <Title>A Three-level Revision Model for Improving Japanese Bad-styled Expressions</Title>
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7 Concluding Remarks
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    <Paragraph position="0"> This paper has proposed a three-level revision model for improving badly-styled Japanese expressions aod introduced a prototype revision support system based on the model, Experimental results show that the system successfully improves the readability of texts and reduces tire contained structural ambiguities. The three-level model effectively realizes a practical revision support system.</Paragraph>
    <Paragraph position="1"> However, a remaining requirement from the real technical writing field is that expert knowledge from technical writers should be accumulated to cover a wider variety of badly-styled expressions. In addition, contextual information must be handled, both for providing contextually adequate alternative expressions and lbr improving contextually-poor expressions and rhetorical structures.</Paragraph>
    <Paragraph position="2"> The proposed model and the prototype system ~s its embodiment, will give a powerful foundation to some other applications, including intellectual tutoring systems and pre-editing systems for machinetranslation. null</Paragraph>
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